Sunday, September 11, 2011

PI

11 comments:

  1. nice p.i. ana

    cool you did a speach on your dog
    funny that rocksy is scard of your cat

    you could of mad it longger ana
    but still great

    from thor.

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  2. Nice P.I
    Next time you could show some photos.
    I liked How Clear you were.

    sam tom ferg josh

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  3. Great P.I Ana I liked how you uesed every bit of detile but next time you could speak slower next time. Ty

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  4. Cool PI Ana.Also fantastic description of Roxy.
    Next time maybe make it a bit longer but don't really know.

    Cindy Bex Jam

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  5. Good speech. We liked how you used lots of adjectives next time show us a photo and look at the audience more and read off a piece of paper not the computer but apart from that great pi.
    Sophie,Sara,Maddi Luke,Lucy

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  6. Great P.I Ana .
    You spoke loud and clear and had an interesting topic. Next time you could of learnt your speech and had some sort of presentation but otherwise well done!
    -Anna, Cat and Hannah

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  7. Nice PI Ana
    you spoke loud and clear you had great simileys
    but next time have some pictures and make it a bit longer and dont speak to fast

    Natalya and Alana

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  8. i wish i had a dog like that you should have a lot more pitueres =)

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  9. too boring for aidie you know how he gets really cool P.I Ana


    Harry,Chaz,Aidie

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  10. nice P.I.

    i liked how you used humour
    you could have had some pictures

    from saul cam camryn

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  11. Great job with your PI, Ana. I think you're brave to write and deliver a speech - not many of the kids would have had your courage. With a speech, everyone looks directly at you. Good on you. I really enjoyed the humour in your speech and the way you made connections with people and things we all know. My suggestion for improvement would be to learn your speech off by heart and put more expression in your voice. Really well done, Ana.

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