Good speech. We liked how you used lots of adjectives next time show us a photo and look at the audience more and read off a piece of paper not the computer but apart from that great pi. Sophie,Sara,Maddi Luke,Lucy
Great P.I Ana . You spoke loud and clear and had an interesting topic. Next time you could of learnt your speech and had some sort of presentation but otherwise well done! -Anna, Cat and Hannah
Great job with your PI, Ana. I think you're brave to write and deliver a speech - not many of the kids would have had your courage. With a speech, everyone looks directly at you. Good on you. I really enjoyed the humour in your speech and the way you made connections with people and things we all know. My suggestion for improvement would be to learn your speech off by heart and put more expression in your voice. Really well done, Ana.
nice p.i. ana
ReplyDeletecool you did a speach on your dog
funny that rocksy is scard of your cat
you could of mad it longger ana
but still great
from thor.
Nice P.I
ReplyDeleteNext time you could show some photos.
I liked How Clear you were.
sam tom ferg josh
Great P.I Ana I liked how you uesed every bit of detile but next time you could speak slower next time. Ty
ReplyDeleteCool PI Ana.Also fantastic description of Roxy.
ReplyDeleteNext time maybe make it a bit longer but don't really know.
Cindy Bex Jam
Good speech. We liked how you used lots of adjectives next time show us a photo and look at the audience more and read off a piece of paper not the computer but apart from that great pi.
ReplyDeleteSophie,Sara,Maddi Luke,Lucy
Great P.I Ana .
ReplyDeleteYou spoke loud and clear and had an interesting topic. Next time you could of learnt your speech and had some sort of presentation but otherwise well done!
-Anna, Cat and Hannah
Nice PI Ana
ReplyDeleteyou spoke loud and clear you had great simileys
but next time have some pictures and make it a bit longer and dont speak to fast
Natalya and Alana
i wish i had a dog like that you should have a lot more pitueres =)
ReplyDeletetoo boring for aidie you know how he gets really cool P.I Ana
ReplyDeleteHarry,Chaz,Aidie
nice P.I.
ReplyDeletei liked how you used humour
you could have had some pictures
from saul cam camryn
Great job with your PI, Ana. I think you're brave to write and deliver a speech - not many of the kids would have had your courage. With a speech, everyone looks directly at you. Good on you. I really enjoyed the humour in your speech and the way you made connections with people and things we all know. My suggestion for improvement would be to learn your speech off by heart and put more expression in your voice. Really well done, Ana.
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