Thursday, October 27, 2011

My PI

12 comments:

  1. Awesome P.I Ana but you could of slowed your words down apart from that it was cool
    Luke and Ty

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  2. Nice P.I. Ana
    Good speach you spoke clear.
    Next time you could make it longer but good description about your cat.

    From Thor Cam Jason

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  3. Nice PI Ana. We liked how you used humor and we liked how you toke our comments from last time into consideration. Next time you could of talked a little slower but apart from that great job.
    Sophie,Sara

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  4. Great Speech Ana-Awesome Descriptions .Good timing .You spoke very clearly. Next time perhaps speak slower.





    Linda Jam Alana

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  5. I really enjoy your speeches, Ana. I like the way you started with your last feedback. Your speech had excellent construction and you made great use of humour again. My suggestion for improvement would be that you learn your speech off by heart, and use cue cards to trigger your aspects.

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  6. Great P.I. Ana it is funny when it is drinking out of the cup and sometimes its head gets stuck. Next time you could show us some pictures.





    from Josh and Aidan

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  7. Great P.I Ana
    I really liked your humour and and decriptive writing but you could of slowed down your speaking.

    From Tom and Sam

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  8. Great PI Ana.
    You spoke loud and clear.
    Tom cat sounds like a really cool pet.
    Next time you could have some sort of presentation.
    -Natalya, Hannah, Cindy, Rebecca

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  9. Good PI Ana
    You used good language and spoke clearly. Next time you could not do it on you pets.
    Maddi Anna

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  10. Great Pi Ana.
    You did really well on describing your cat.
    Next time you could do something different.
    Caitlin

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  11. nice PI and very funny one next a little more detail on the xcats face and what it looks like

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  12. Nice P.I. I liked how you connected your term 2 and 3 P.I.s together. Next time maybe do something different but you did very well
    from camryn and ferg

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