On Monday 3rd May. The minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experince. We are learning to be intresting writers using lots of details and adjectives. We have learnt to get straight into the action. I think my story... pretty good because I have used a couple of good similes. To improve my writing next time I will... Use some more voice Tuesday, May 25, 2010
Fishin Story My Reflection
On Monday 3rd May. The minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experince. We are learning to be intresting writers using lots of details and adjectives. We have learnt to get straight into the action. I think my story... pretty good because I have used a couple of good similes. To improve my writing next time I will... Use some more voice 
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hey ana i saw your work you did great i
ReplyDeleteloved your fishing story and about explaning your
self im so happy you put my name in your writing
and the video cool efoilo awesome dude
from sophie