Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Cross Country Reflection



At the beginning of the term when we started our Cross Country training I felt... Nervous because I wanted to good in the Cross Country

Now Cross Country is finished, I feel Happy because I think I did pretty good

I repented Keraru House in the Cross Country. We finished 1st

My Goal at this years Cross Country was top 10

I came 8th in our School Cross Country

My biggest Achievement was coming in the Top 10

My goal for next years Cross is Top 6

Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Fishin Story My Reflection

On Monday 3rd May. The minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experince. We are learning to be intresting writers using lots of details and adjectives. We have learnt to get straight into the action. I think my story... pretty good because I have used a couple of good similes. To improve my writing next time I will... Use some more voice