
This is my Color Burst Art
I feel great cause I improved for all of them.

On Monday 3rd May. The minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experince. We are learning to be intresting writers using lots of details and adjectives. We have learnt to get straight into the action. I think my story... pretty good because I have used a couple of good similes. To improve my writing next time I will... Use some more voice